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Market Day


Author: CrypticBard
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Market Day


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squashed cabbage leaves,
crushed petals, broken stems
strewn along grey slush


wind whisks cobbled street,
gravel crunches under
hooves and booted feet


rain-drooped marquees
whisper freshest gossip;
clock tower tolls on the hour


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Submitted on 2010-01-02 04:15:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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