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    dots Submission Name: In The Love of Gaia and Apollodots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIn The Love of Gaia and Apollodots
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    Nubian Queen she stands before him
    In her regalia of blue and green
    Shimmered in the sunlight
    Of the throne of love she breathed
    The tree of life configured
    In her sacred geometry

    Apollo, the conscious lion
    The proud King of awakenings
    Lifted from her tender hand
    The sum of all her dreams
    To be held within the flaming orb
    Aloft by eagles wings

    And so, of eternal choreography
    Became their dance within the womb of stars
    Gaia and Apollo traverse the heavens
    In their ballet of countless aeons
    Each a worship to the other
    And the realisation of all their dreams

    With desire the flowing rhythms
    The aching touch of sensual expressions
    They forge their need through loverís hearts
    And with these holy human vessels
    Entwine their fingers in awe and appreciation
    Their feet tread upon these Earthly plains once again

    So it is said;
    That if a man and a woman
    Can find in love, their, unconditionally
    Hold each other precious, for all their individuality
    Then that love will span the distance
    Where God and Goddess walk
    They will become the pure expressions
    Of their sacred geometry





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