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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 9
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Submitted on 2010-01-03 16:03:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      excellent!!!! i will remember this!!!
    | Posted on 2010-01-04 00:00:00 | by sombreanddim | [ Reply to This ]


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