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    Author: littlemisskitte
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 5/12/9
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Misc
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    I stand here. feeling content. as if all is right in the world. watching the rain glitter on the streets, as the light from the moon reflects on the pavement. The rain washes whats left from the day before off my face. The sound is calming, almost hypnotic. And the smell...so fresh...so innocent.




    Submitted on 2010-01-05 18:05:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      there is good stuff in the dalmatian effect of white light on puddles in the rain....and there is silence in the noises that soothe.... say that over and over and over and never repeating because you would repeat yourself...the smell was a nice touch on the grip of the thought...
    | Posted on 2010-01-10 00:00:00 | by guruleocrates | [ Reply to This ]


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