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    dots Submission Name: Porcelain dolldots
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    Author: WhatsThat
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/1/4
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 533
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsPorcelain dolldots
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    Pretty, perfect, fragile

    Porcelain doll's longevity

    Depending on her master

    Pretty, perfect, frail

    Painted baby blue eyes

    Searching, searching yet finding nothing

    Pretty, silent, feeble

    Frills on her dress

    Sitting their collecting dust

    Still, silent, forgotten

    Beautiful golden curls

    Fading from the sun

    Still, silent, forgotten, shattered...




    Submitted on 2010-01-06 06:34:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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