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    dots Submission Name: Mind Gamesdots
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    Author: rosealiehale
    ASL Info:    22/F/Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    1.65 - 72/39/25
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 687
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 665



    Description:
       this is part of a poem my FRIEND wrote.I DID NOT write this.


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    dotsMind Gamesdots
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    I'm sick of all your games and all the lies.
    of all the times you said goodbye.

    the promises you meant to keep.
    the simple things that made me weep.
    the future that you said we'd share, all the times I hope'd you'd care.
    That didn't matter not at all, you built me up just to watch me fall.

    the empty promises you made to me.
    your not the person I thought you'd be.
    but, now I'm dead inside and out....but, I've still got you to speak about.

    Screw you darling, and the promises you made.
    You never loved and the memories will fade.




    Submitted on 2010-01-06 14:00:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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