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    dots Submission Name: "Song" by Adrienne Richdots
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    Author: Eyamma
    ASL Info:    16/Sry, I'm taken/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 22/21/77
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       This is a poem written by Adrienne Rich. I really like it. xD


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    dots"Song" by Adrienne Richdots
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    You're wondering if I'm lonely:
    OK then, yes, I'm lonely
    as a plane rides lonely and level
    on its radio beam, aiming
    across the Rockies
    for the blue-strung aisles
    of an airfield on the ocean.

    You want to ask, am I lonely?
    Well, of course, lonely
    as a woman driving across country
    day after day, leaving behind
    mile after mile
    little towns she might have stopped
    and lived and died in, lonely

    If I'm lonely
    it must be the loneliness
    of waking first, of breathing
    dawn's first cold breath on the city
    of being the one awake
    in a house wrapped in sleep

    If I'm lonely
    it's with the rowboat ice-fast on the shore
    in the last red light of the year
    that knows what it is, that knows it's neither
    ice nor mud nor winter light
    but wood, with a gift for burning.




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