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    dots Submission Name: How It Happens...dots
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    Author: Gunforhire
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 1/5/8
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Just a good ole fashioned love poem


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    dotsHow It Happens...dots
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    Wondering eyes welcome us
    Leading our once lost souls to one another
    Finding a common ground from which to blossom
    Enticing our wills to run free
    Nervous laughter and shy smiles
    Returning to our youth.

    Mere words divide us
    Their intent was innocent at first
    They shrunk as our passion ignited between us
    Each breath uttered begs for our embrace to tighten
    Shuttering lips and burning desires
    Soft and simple is our touch.

    A string binds us
    Knotted are we by one emotion
    It ties us, for better or worse, together
    This universal phenomenon tells me we are meant to be
    You are my light, and I your shadow.
    A love that bloomed.




    Submitted on 2010-01-08 01:39:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This happens to be one of my favorite poems from you. No matter how many times I come across it, I always stop and read it. I greatly admire your ability to capture the awkwardness, the hesitation, and the desire to connect with another in such a short poem.
    | Posted on 2010-01-08 00:00:00 | by KotaNashi | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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