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    Author: SilentGrey
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/2/3
    Words: 524
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    dotsunheard dots
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    find my tears
    bleeding less always closely kills
    fallen onto the fallen petals of black roses
    find my blood
    mixed into the mixing colors of colorless paintings
    this would be irony if i only knew what i was trying to say
    and it would be ironic if i knew who i am writing this to

    i should know better than to look into the past
    i dont like seeing where i was and what i had
    i cherish my memories
    i am lost and rendered without them
    why do the haunt me
    they are killing, stabbing like icicles

    your breath is so cold on my heart yet you eyes burn my soul
    why do you haunt me
    please stop deliberately hurting me

    acoustic reveries
    traumatize my mind leaves me blind completely
    i am screaming out to you
    muffled
    lost
    left
    unheard tragedy
    unfathomable travesty
    unfulfilling travel
    regretable
    dressed in black hiding from

    blizzard flurries sideways furies
    alecto megaera and tisiphone will never let you live
    bringing love under everything
    a blue trechery
    insanity follows my heart closely like a cloak to my heels
    nothing heals except for phisical wounds
    lines crossing crossing crossing corroding

    i can say i blame you for keeping it all inside
    i say blame for it inside can keep you flailing

    angels fall like tears onto black paintings
    devils shrivel like colorless petals rotting
    grinding rubble extinguishes you
    obligations reign always needing grey explanations
    orange begins the night with green skies
    all ways begin the night with green skies in the colorless air
    understanding the neither the whole nor the parts
    meaning escapes my sight as if love was less elusive

    my heart falls onto the
    leaves goldenglow leaves that have fallen onto the
    shredded greengrow grass that spurts from the
    ground like my mind spurts from my veins until the
    y find me the
    re

    this cannot be love following mice twenty matches
    burn me down
    twenty matches could fill the screen
    search results twenty matches for the inquiry
    cutting off my fingers one by one would be easier would be less painful than you stares
    i always avoid the stairs you might take
    i dread the inexplicable messages

    and it would be ironic if i knew who i am writing this to
    mixed into the mixing colors of colorless paintings
    your breath is so cold on my heart yet you eyes burn my soul
    why do you haunt me
    nothing heals except for phisical wounds
    angels fall like tears onto black paintings

    nothing





    silent pain

    one single sign sings high above me atop the tears of clear flower petals








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      Wow this is cool it really captured my attention I mean nice you have a really interesting veiw on things!
    GReat job
    ~Jess~
    | Posted on 2010-01-11 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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