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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Everytime I try to leave,
    You grab me back,
    Back into the darkness,
    Never have I gotten away,
    For as far as I have gotten,
    Was to the door that never opens,
    For it only opens when you are done with me,
    So as the door opens,
    And you let me go,
    I shall go to a place where you will never go,
    For it's the only place you are not,
    But my thoughts will alway be there,
    But I have to get away from you,
    So I deside to go,
    Go with my thoughts,
    Into the light of death,
    Never to be seen again.




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