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    dots Submission Name: Tuck You Into Beddots
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    Author: DiniBini
    ASL Info:    421/Sexual Pan/ Dreamland
    Elite Ratio:    1.43 - 1/5/5
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
    Total Views: 765
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    dotsTuck You Into Beddots
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    Pillow fishes and marshmellow bars.
    Let's head over to the candy car.
    Have them drive us very far.

    To a place were it is safe.
    Where they serve cake.
    Where we are all smiley face.

    Bloodshed and strategies, Swords and Guns.
    Oh what fun, what fun.
    I only kid, a heavy heart weighs a ton.

    I'm trying to make it lighter.
    For I am, you are, not much of a fighter.
    My arms wraps around you tighter.

    To a place were it is safe.
    Where they serve cake.
    Where we are all smiley face.

    Pillow fishes and marshmellow bars.
    Let's head over to the candy car.
    Have them drive us very far




    Submitted on 2010-01-11 04:17:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you.
    I didn't know this poem would do such a thing. :o

    And yes it is my picture, thank you again.
    | Posted on 2010-01-11 00:00:00 | by DiniBini | [ Reply to This ]
      that pic is also cute... is it yours?
    | Posted on 2010-01-11 00:00:00 | by sombreanddim | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah!!!! I LOVED this poem. This is sooo cute. its also nostalgic for a big grown up like me... umm you got me into tears... and thanks for that
    | Posted on 2010-01-11 00:00:00 | by sombreanddim | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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