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    dots Submission Name: Longingdots
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    Author: Maskannai
    ASL Info:    28/Female/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 214/184/78
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
    Total Views: 481
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 81



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       Haven't written a Haiku in forever.. Hope I did a decent job in returning to it..


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    dotsLongingdots
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    I long to hear you
    Your subtle touch caressing
    Leaves a wintry kiss




    Submitted on 2010-01-11 13:03:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it... combines that 'nature' thing I was lacking in mine (I knew there had to be more to a haiku). Have you ever read "Haiku for Zombies" or some silly such book, it's a fun little read. I think there is a vampire one too.
    | Posted on 2010-01-13 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      It's been a long time since I've seen a haiku on here. And if i do say so myself, i think it was beautiful. Like looking at a flower, there's not much for you to say, but the beauty is there and very obvious. Good write ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2010-01-11 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]


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