I like it... combines that 'nature' thing I was lacking in mine (I knew there had to be more to a haiku). Have you ever read "Haiku for Zombies" or some silly such book, it's a fun little read. I think there is a vampire one too.
It's been a long time since I've seen a haiku on here. And if i do say so myself, i think it was beautiful. Like looking at a flower, there's not much for you to say, but the beauty is there and very obvious. Good write ~*~katara~*~