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    dots Submission Name: A Kindred Coffee Souldots
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    Author: Maskannai
    ASL Info:    28/Female/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 214/184/78
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       Kind of funny.. A customer came in and this is what transpired, and I just had to write about it..


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    dotsA Kindred Coffee Souldots
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    A day like any other,
    But different with your appearance;

    You came in and grabbed a coffee
    The drink of the gods
    I've heard said so many times
    And I agreed wholeheartedly;

    We chatted about coffee
    And the wonders
    Of its differing flavors
    And mixtures;

    Then you offhandedly mentioned
    That your favorite
    Was an iced raspberry mocha
    And I discovered I had a kindred coffee soul...




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      I like it! It reminds me of so many small conversation had over coffee or the like. Very sweet and innocent. I guess the only confusing thing for me is the story. Does the narrator work there? The person who came in talked about this while ordering? Did the person order that coffee?

    Aside from the plot confusions (that was possible in short poems?) I enjoyed very much reading it :)
    | Posted on 2010-08-19 00:00:00 | by mtg1988 | [ Reply to This ]
      Credit go to someone else, but I couldn't help myself: Bottom's up!~

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    “Caffeine is my shepherd; I shall not doze.

    It maketh me to wake in green pastures:

    It leadeth me beyond the sleeping masses.

    It restoreth my buzz:

    It leadeth me in the paths of consciousness for its name's sake.

    Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of addiction,

    I will fear no Equal™:

    For thou art with me; thy cream and thy sugar they comfort me.

    Thou preparest a carafe before me in the presence of The Starbucks:

    Thou anointest my day with pep; my mug runneth over.

    Surely richness and taste shall follow me all the days of my life

    And I will dwell in the House of Mochas forever.”
    | Posted on 2010-01-25 00:00:00 | by Urisen | [ Reply to This ]
      I made a coffee friend... she lives on energy drinks and Java monster drinks, and recently got me hooked on Sonic's Mocha Java Chiller with an extra shot of mocha...

    I like coffee, I just never want it until bedtime is the problem... altho recently, I find a cup of coffee puts me right out to sleep. Weird. Who knew the cure for my insomnia was a pot away this whole time???
    | Posted on 2010-01-13 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      coffee is black
    with creame
    or with sugar
    other forms of drink are iced and raspberry
    | Posted on 2010-01-13 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! This is delightful; light-hearted, spirited, and gleeful for meeting a new potential friend.

    Just a nice friendly little chit-chat that was fun to read!
    | Posted on 2010-01-12 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is really silly, almost child-like, I love it. Like how kids can become attached to someone so quickly, you and this person attached quickly. But an iced raspberry mocha? I haven't heard that one before, and I love coffee. I'm more of a caramel frappuccino person.

    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2010-01-12 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      It sounds a bit random thought-ish.. but I like it. I can image the whole scene and how cute and somewhat funny it must have been. Coffee does seem to be "in" these days doesn't it?
    I like the sense of camaraderie from only a moment of passing... and the need for small-talk to keep the moment going.
    Don't you love it when something or someone can change a rather ordinary day into a smiley one?
    I'll have to try the iced raspberry. Have you ever tried strawberry cream? Yummy.

    | Posted on 2010-01-12 00:00:00 | by kre8ive1 | [ Reply to This ]
      iced raspberry mocha?
    please explain that one to me... theres no such thing over here where i exist...

    you work in a coffee shop?
    at the moment so do i and i love striking up conversations with the regular customers. any customers really. today i had one of the students testing out the german she learnt in class on me. it was very impressive.
    and you get to the point where you remember what a person orders so you see them coming and start making their coffee for them and it makes them feel special or something... that someones taken time to know something about them... you know?


    im allergic to drinking coffee these days. i just came back from ethiopia, the home of coffee, and everything here tastes so... horrid in comparison lol.
    | Posted on 2010-01-12 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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