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    dots Submission Name: The Basic Deaddots
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    Author: The Poets Will
    ASL Info:    15/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/2/3
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 555
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 782



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       Something to kill off 5 min.


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    dotsThe Basic Deaddots
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    It breathes for me. It talks for me. It moves and lives in my stead and all I can do is watch. Its a weight that takes me under, a mass draping over me suffocating me. It speaks in tongues that I could never reconize but it only speaks it to me. It commits actions that I wouldnt. It hurts people ranging from those who I love to those unknown. It feeds off evil and negativety. Its almost as a hunger that never stops. Even long after my body gives up and fades away this shadow will remain. May god take me and end it all for my body is just a shell. It no longer holds any part of me, just a sliver of my mind. All my body is good for is housing this demon that has replaced me. Im no longer living yet im not yet dead. Im not a person but im not a ghost. Im just basically dead.




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