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To him, cus I can never say it enough:

Author: PopRocksRae
ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
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"it's the way you love me...."
-this kiss-
by:Faith Hill

To him, cus I can never say it enough:

it's the way I strive to be better
and stay up all night just to talk.
the way you move closer to my heart
and closer to me when we walk.

the way I can't stop looking at you
I can't yell without feeling bad.
It's the way you look at me when I fall alseep
or the way you can't stay mad.

the way I turn some heads unware
cus I'm looking straight at you.
or the reason I close my mouth sometimes
so you can tell your opinion too.

the way I let you win a fight
cus I love watching your eyes.
or the way I get tangled up in your world
when I don't want to be outside.

it's the way I curl up in your arms
or the way I can't stop laughing sometimes.
it's the times where I get clusmy
or even the times I cry.

you're my reason for smiling.
the reason I am in love.
to you, I love you.
cus I can never say it enough.

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