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    dots Submission Name: To him, cus I can never say it enough:dots

    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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       "it's the way you love me...."
    -this kiss-
    by:Faith Hill

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    dotsTo him, cus I can never say it enough:dots

    it's the way I strive to be better
    and stay up all night just to talk.
    the way you move closer to my heart
    and closer to me when we walk.

    the way I can't stop looking at you
    I can't yell without feeling bad.
    It's the way you look at me when I fall alseep
    or the way you can't stay mad.

    the way I turn some heads unware
    cus I'm looking straight at you.
    or the reason I close my mouth sometimes
    so you can tell your opinion too.

    the way I let you win a fight
    cus I love watching your eyes.
    or the way I get tangled up in your world
    when I don't want to be outside.

    it's the way I curl up in your arms
    or the way I can't stop laughing sometimes.
    it's the times where I get clusmy
    or even the times I cry.

    you're my reason for smiling.
    the reason I am in love.
    to you, I love you.
    cus I can never say it enough.

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