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    dots Submission Name: Gaia and The Minator dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsGaia and The Minator dots
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    Ages passed
    For The Minator
    As he remained in the underworld
    Hidden in his alcove
    Along the tunnel of the cave
    Hidden in his maze

    Ages passed with his wound
    And always pained
    Though he bore it well
    With willing suffering
    The wisdom of his knowing

    Ages passed as men of renown
    Sought to slay or pray
    To him
    Seeing only the darkness he lived within
    Seeing only the pain of his suffering
    And in the distortions of their own hell
    They came to him

    Few there were
    Who passed along the sacred corridor
    And stopped to kneel
    Before the sacred Minator
    Few could see his mirror
    And is he absorbed the curse of doubt

    Ages passed for the Minator
    Yet he bore his wound
    Never doubting
    And long was his trail
    And long was his faith
    And all for the better good


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    It was Gaia who one day came
    Searching for the alcove
    Hidden in the maze
    Gaia, mother of the Earth
    Sought out her ancient warrior

    And there she found him
    As she had left him
    And still the wound, afflicted, she saw
    Lay bleeding on his hindquarter


    In that dim lit crucible he had waited
    And in that dim lit crucible she knelt before him
    And rushed to raise her arms about him

    “My old friend” she whispered softly to his ear
    while her arms held tight to his massive shoulder
    “Do you remember me
    “It has been so long, my brave and valiant friend
    “Does the wound still pain you so

    A soft and guttural acknowledgement
    Came gentle from his throat

    And Gaia wept

    “Ah, my brave warrior, such a burden you rested
    “Such a trail upon yourself
    “But my sweet one, know this
    “The time is almost done

    “Though praise was never what you sought
    “Soon, you shall have acknowledgement
    “And all will see and give respect
    “To this dark and underground part you have played
    “Soon my dear old friend
    “It is they who will heal your wound
    “And take your pain away

    And there she stayed for a time
    To comfort an old friend who’s burden had been long
    But born with dignity
    Though many that had come to him
    Had been reeked and seethed in hell

    There she stayed to soothe and ease his brow
    Remembering
    How he had sworn by sacred heart and vow
    To guard the darkness
    The sacred darkness
    From those who would distort its truth

    In the dim light of his alcove
    Gaia laid her body against his
    And made oath that the comfort of ages to come
    Would be his
    And Gaia wept in the Minator’s embrace
    She wept for him
    And for the ages passed









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