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    dots Submission Name: Scroll of The Minatordots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    I
    They say
    Am just a reflection
    Of the world

    Just a mirror
    In the torment
    A reflection
    In the love

    I
    They say
    Am just a ripple
    On the pool of the Universe

    I scry upon the sacred stones
    And turn from harmony
    The discords
    Of my want

    I
    They say
    Am born of darkness
    In the confounding of truth

    And worshiped in the dirt
    For the sake of power constructs
    I have seen
    Inside the crooked hearts

    I
    They say
    For lack of understanding
    Stand upside down in the bowls of the Earth

    Yet it is their own night they worship
    Their own blackness
    Their own lightless void
    In the end I shall consign them to

    I
    Have born “witness” to corruption
    And know it well
    I; remember your names

    Fallen, fallen is Babylon the great
    Was my purity ever reminded by my pain
    The wound upon my side
    Did not remit

    I
    It was who counted your souls
    And beheld your evil
    As you brought blood to my alter

    Yes; to know the fools
    The sick and divergent
    To walk amongst those
    And in the end shall consign them to

    Never ending darkness

    I
    They say
    Am just a reflection
    Of the world

    Just a mirror
    In the torment
    A reflection
    In the love

    I
    They say
    Am just a ripple
    On the pool of the Universe





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      And it's spelt Altar you fúcking moron
    | Posted on 2010-01-13 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]
      They say
    Am just a reflection
    Of the world

    Just a mirror
    In the torment
    A reflection
    In the love

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    | Posted on 2010-01-13 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]


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