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    dots Submission Name: the verge of insanitydots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsthe verge of insanitydots
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    life is stressfull
    and it hurts so much
    to much shit going on
    with so much pain
    i just want to hide away
    to be able to escape it all
    to start anew
    but the memories still follow
    they dont give up
    so lock them in a box
    and forget
    but then love comes along
    and they wont to know
    to kiss it all away
    but they always leave
    or make it worse
    then the memories are back
    one continuose circle
    driving me insain




    Submitted on 2010-01-13 21:24:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i completely understand this poem. more than you will ever know. you are a never ending cycle of thoughts that i cannot make go away. not that i want to, but you know what i mean. i dont want you to hurt anymore. i want you to let us make new memories that will stand the test of time, and be happy again together. you are not the only one hurting in this situation. i hurt to. and only you can make it stop. just as i am the only one that can make it stop for you. i have to agree with the other comment you have on your spelling. that is very cool.
    | Posted on 2010-01-16 00:00:00 | by thomasnkristen | [ Reply to This ]
      if continuose was on purpose cool
    other words
    and

    replace the word [censored] and you might use it outside of elite skills,
    | Posted on 2010-01-14 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]


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