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    dots Submission Name: Just moredots
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    Author: SAGITTREVEALED
    ASL Info:    22/m/ P.C. FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 26/26/16
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Legend
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    Description:
       Just another age-old( non-christian) prophecy coming to pass. JUST MORE of what everyone hears, only I have felt from my earliest memories. I had to put the parenthesis so THEY don't steal these words and make them their own like they do with SO SO much else.


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    dotsJust moredots
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    Now again as january wanes, I hold in my hand a swathe of days. the seasons again change, with the passing of Aurora's flames,
    and the lush green floods back into the plains.
    Yet still I wait for darker days. The Earth trembles and ocean waves, the sky moves silent, and clouds do stay. A wind tumbles carelessly just like some game. Yet still I brace for those darker days.
    A tree has grown taller, just another turn of the vine.
    a mountain did crumble, as a lover did pine.
    a beautiful life borne, and at this same time.
    I fear these darker days.
    Can you not feel it? do you not see?
    to you this is news , but certainly not to me.
    I see them then, I felt them now.
    They are here to pass, still unknown how.
    yet I hold fast for THE Darker Days.




    Submitted on 2010-01-14 01:33:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh Honey.
    You are a child of night.
    Good peice, you little dark one.

    Now stop grumbling.
    love,
    :)Carrie
    | Posted on 2010-01-14 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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