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    dots Submission Name: A Sniperdots
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    Author: mohammad8682
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2/0/1
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsA Sniperdots
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    Sleepless
    Thoughtless
    With eager
    And Sadness

    He watched
    Reconnoitred

    It came
    With whilte feathers
    A shelter it saught

    A moment passed
    It regreted the rain




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