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    dots Submission Name: For Nickdots
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    Author: wovenwords
    ASL Info:    19/F/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 108/303/189
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1031
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 497



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    dotsFor Nickdots
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    Early morning on a Thursday
    I'm listless, plagued with wide eyes
    holding your resting body
    as loosely as blue ribbon,
    unraveling,
    while you fall into a heavy maroon sleep.
    Candlelight flickers, illuminating the lampshade,
    creating soft, giant ripples
    that breathe across the crumbling ceiling.
    I watch the shadows come to life,
    sleep somewhere far off in the night
    and your breath becomes heavy as a charcoal cloud.




    Submitted on 2010-01-14 16:57:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautiful imagery

    Lied the choice of words.

    Made me feel a little sad though, wondering the point of the poem, the reason for writing, the reason for being,

    It was good though,

    Thanks
    | Posted on 2010-01-15 00:00:00 | by orpheus | [ Reply to This ]


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