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    dots Submission Name: Only you....dots
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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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       Rayne is my best friend, my girlfriend and I dont care what people think of my because Im happy and so is she and thats all that matters......this is for Rayne and no else....


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    dotsOnly you....dots
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    A life without meaning,
    Is a pointless never ending cycle,
    That has no end and no start.....

    When I met her my life started to get meaning,
    That this cycle of darkness has ended,
    But not for long,
    For my thoughts of the past,
    Come crashing over me,
    Like a wave of water.

    But I am not scared,
    not of the water,
    not of the feelings I have,
    But the fact that I still bleed,
    Bleed the blood you love,
    The stuff that keeps me alive,
    But I feel like you make me live,
    So I try to stop for you.

    And you are here every day,
    Waiting for us to talk,
    Waiting for my hello,
    And never wanting my good night...

    So I bleed for you when your gone,
    For when I'm alone,
    So don't be mad with me,
    And love me for who I am.....




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      only you you you if you emote purely with the intent to capture the impression of the thing you want to communicate you wont find the muddle of emotions....
    | Posted on 2010-01-14 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]


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