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    dots Submission Name: I Don't Love You But,dots
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    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 597
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    dotsI Don't Love You But,dots
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    I will stay with you
    I said I would stay with you
    You can trust me
    Yes...
    I still love him
    Yes...
    I'm still in love with him
    But I'm with you
    He won't take me away from you
    Don't you trust me?
    Babe please don't get mad
    Why are you raising your hand against me?
    ...
    Yes I know I made you do it
    Yes I know you love me
    Yes I know your sorry for...
    Hitting me again
    I understand
    It's my fault
    I won't make you do it again
    Yes I'll stay with you
    ...
    Yes,
    I love you




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