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    dots Submission Name: He's Backdots
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    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
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    He was my Christmas present
    I had been wanting him for so long
    I missed him so much
    When he left
    He disowned me
    Disowned the family
    Disowned everything

    But now he is back with me
    And I will never let him go again
    He is the missing piece of my soul
    He is me

    I could never hate him for what he did
    For all the pain he caused
    Never
    That would be like hating myself
    Like looking into a mirror and
    Hating everything you see staring back at you
    I love him to much

    He said he will stay this time
    For good
    I believe him
    He said he never wants to leave me again
    That he was lost without me
    I know I was lost without him
    We can't live without each other

    Our heartbeats will forever
    Beat in sync
    Born just minuetes apart from each other
    We will always have
    Each other




    Submitted on 2010-01-15 10:18:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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