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    dots Submission Name: Winds of Changedots
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    Author: orpheus
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 188/165/57
    Words: 513
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Political
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsWinds of Changedots
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    I'm a gentleman and a scholar,
    President like the Dollar.
    Resident of the squalor,
    Now just a rem-anent.
    The horror's a testament,
    Representing my honour.
    Fucking with Me's in,
    direct detriment to your karma!
    Terroristic Bin La-din,
    I never miss like I'm Rakim.
    A clever kid but never did,
    I put an attendance in collage.
    Never had to go to learn,
    life's treacherous full of carnage!
    Regardless of the fact's
    Intelligence only halves it.
    No sentiments for them varmints,
    Their words are flowery,
    With a feminesticy varnish,
    That gets me sick honestly.
    Words are my weaponry,
    Letters be lit like a rocket!
    Pessimists the time has come,
    To see that hell is what you wanted.
    Optimists to see what you do,
    Whenever you get caught in,
    Negativity,
    And end up on the bottom,
    Relatively speaking.
    Using flexibility of mind,
    To solve the problem,
    Evolve, revolve, be bold until you've got it!

    "Your fate is in your hands,
    Time's written in sands,
    What you seek is what you get,
    This is the law of the land.
    No matter your colour or creed,
    Your coming with me,
    Cause I've uncovered and discovered
    What they don't want you see" (x2)

    Through pestilence and the sorrow,
    The deadliest just like Sodom.
    Seven sins beckoning,
    Till God sends His Son on comets.
    Tress-passes encouraged,
    But death laughs at all his martyrs.
    Tomorrow never is,
    For those cemented in the after(life).
    These sedatives keep me calmer,
    Took my medicine from my mama.
    As a baby I never settled in,
    The bed of sin with my father.
    DJ let it spin faster,
    Rhetoric in disaster.
    As these days we brave,
    Cliche's irrelevant for this saga.

    "Your fate is in your hands,
    Time's written in sands,
    What you seek is what you get,
    This is the law of the land.
    No matter your colour or creed,
    Your coming with me,
    Cause I've uncovered and discovered
    What they don't want you see"(x2)

    My exodus from this saga,
    Dropping elements like a bomber.
    This method is respected,
    Ain't it America and Osama?
    Is this the devil or is it God huh,
    Who is the rebel in ya back garden?
    But I still walk around bare-chested,
    Celibate from this armour.
    Call me a heretic cause I'm scarred up,
    this is my heritage it gets darker.
    And hard to see it's relative,
    When it's all negative it's just harder.
    There's no settlement fo'what they ask us,
    S'not for excellence or for the larger,
    man it's for their experiment,
    to our detriment but I'm smarter so know...

    "Your fate is in your hands,
    Time's written in sands,
    What you seek is what you get,
    This is the law of the land.
    No matter your colour or creed,
    Your coming with me,
    Cause I've uncovered and discovered
    What they don't want you see"(x2)




    Submitted on 2010-01-15 12:12:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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