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    dots Submission Name: Remnants Of Majestydots
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    Author: ShelteredRain
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2/0/1
    Words: 397
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Broken
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    Description:
       Their have been many citys such as Babylon and Ancient Rome that it was thought would never fall but as with all things thay evetually did and their have been many other once powerful citys that have been forgotten and all that is left of them is ruines.


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    dotsRemnants Of Majestydots
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     Desolate and ruined she stands                      remnants of majesty                                         of once powerful lands                                     Foxes and scavengers now hide                      where princes and nobles lived and died         piles of ruble now lay                                        where proud palaces once stood                     fountains that shimmered under golden rays   now reside under darkened hoods                   Time has taken its toll                                       her kings are forever forgotten                        sand has total control                                       over the lands knights once fought for             rocks and sand are all that's left of these once majestic lands




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