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    dots Submission Name: The Light.dots

    Author: TasteMyRainbow
    ASL Info:    17/Male/In your pants.
    Elite Ratio:    5.07 - 21/22/17
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 984
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       I really have no idea.

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    dotsThe Light.dots

    Why are humans born?
    Why do we have to go on living?
    Why do we have to die?

    There’s a light, at the end.
    A way of knowing.
    A way of truth.
    There’s a definite way.

    To only seek the answer.
    To find it.
    To grasp something we hold dear.

    We live to live.
    We die to die.
    Were born to be born.
    The meaning is fallacious.

    The clouds are setting in.
    Marking the light, we strive to reach.
    There’s a path for us.
    If only we could follow.

    Were born to live.
    We live to make it.
    We die to make the light.
    Were human.

    Submitted on 2010-01-16 14:31:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The inevitable question: Why? Life is the subject to be considered and light the way to follow.

    Overall, I believe this write beckons the reader to ponder on life and death and if there is a light at the end of the road. I feel that we are living life now and practicing...there is light at the end of the road, but it is something that must be sought while living. After death, it is when life truly begins. Death is a resting period - a waiting period for each one.

    I love the way you call the reader to ponder deeply on the meaning of life and death. I have always said, "We live to die and we die to live."

    Interesting questions about important topics...at the end - we are human.

    | Posted on 2010-01-16 00:00:00 | by CaramelCandy | [ Reply to This ]

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