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    dots Submission Name: A Love Between Right and Wrongdots

    Author: Gunforhire
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 1/5/8
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       A love poem I wrote for someone dear to me

    Enjoy and thank you for my time

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    dotsA Love Between Right and Wrongdots

    With angel's wings
    I'd fly to you.
    With demon's wings
    You'd embrace me.
    An unlikely union.
    A perfect match.

    Your hands glide over me
    Touching each scar I earned.
    My hands brush across you
    Sliky smooth is your skin
    An unfitting sight.
    An undying trust.

    My kiss is tender and simple
    against you slender lips
    Your tongue begs to taste mine
    bringing about sinful ectasy
    A bitter sweet gesture
    A loving romance

    She is my darkness
    enlightening me to the truth.
    I am her light
    eclipsing her pain given by the world.
    A fallen angel
    in love with
    An unrightful demon

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      Whoa, talk about forbidden love. c;
    | Posted on 2010-01-24 00:00:00 | by KotaNashi | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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