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    dots Submission Name: A Bag Full of Nightfeardots

    Author: DiniBini
    ASL Info:    421/Sexual Pan/ Dreamland
    Elite Ratio:    1.43 - 1/5/5
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Bag Full of Nightfeardots

    A bag full of nightmares
    Repetitious nightmares
    Alive, Alive they have become
    Can't sleep
    Sleep is dreadful

    My fear of seeing you again
    Your fear of never seeing me again.
    Your nightmare is my dream
    My nightmare is your dream

    Love has lost its appeal.
    For I no longer wish to love.
    I have you
    You have me

    It is not a choice for me to stay.
    Forced here to stay.
    What am I to you?
    I am not much, of course.

    I have nothing for you.
    Something is opposite then nothing, that is what you have.
    Silly me
    Silly you

    Our heads become twisted in the game
    A game that we play at night
    Nightmares, I do not fear.
    I realized I fear commitment.

    Nightmares, you are gone.
    Gone with my heart.
    So sly, so quiet.
    You have seen to quiet my heart.

    No longer there.
    Silly me
    Silly you

    A bag full of fear
    Repetitious fear
    Dead, Dead they have yet become
    Could sleep
    Sleep is sweetly beckoning me.

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