Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: A Bag Full of Nightfeardots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: DiniBini
    ASL Info:    421/Sexual Pan/ Dreamland
    Elite Ratio:    1.43 - 1/5/5
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 650
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1195



    Description:
       I no I'm a sucky poet, but practice make perfect, well a mile close to perfection.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsA Bag Full of Nightfeardots
    -------------------------------------------


    A bag full of nightmares
    Repetitious nightmares
    Alive, Alive they have become
    Can't sleep
    Sleep is dreadful

    My fear of seeing you again
    Your fear of never seeing me again.
    Your nightmare is my dream
    My nightmare is your dream

    Love has lost its appeal.
    For I no longer wish to love.
    I have you
    You have me

    It is not a choice for me to stay.
    Forced here to stay.
    What am I to you?
    I am not much, of course.

    I have nothing for you.
    Something is opposite then nothing, that is what you have.
    Silly me
    Silly you

    Our heads become twisted in the game
    A game that we play at night
    Nightmares, I do not fear.
    I realized I fear commitment.

    Nightmares, you are gone.
    Gone with my heart.
    So sly, so quiet.
    You have seen to quiet my heart.

    No longer there.
    Silly me
    Silly you

    A bag full of fear
    Repetitious fear
    Dead, Dead they have yet become
    Could sleep
    Sleep is sweetly beckoning me.




    Submitted on 2010-01-17 01:59:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Etiquette written by saartha
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    Shi written by ShyOne
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Angel Eyes written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Carry written by saartha
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    Love written by saartha
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    New users can only get up to 5 comments if they have given 2 or less.