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    dots Submission Name: Be my frienddots
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    Author: Celerity
    ASL Info:    18/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    0.89 - 0/2/8
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 913
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 687



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    dotsBe my frienddots
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    Be my friend, not just my used-to-be
    I won't be your enemy; I refuse to be
    We can no longer be man and wife
    There are too many problems
    Too much strife
    We're both still parents
    Of two little guys
    Who are too young to understand
    The sudden good-byes
    I know it's hard for you to bend
    But for the children sake
    Please be my friend
    We have good times to remember
    Bad times to forget
    Don't throw it all away
    We're not through just yet
    We still have something
    Though the marriage must end
    So again I ask you

    Please be my friend




    Submitted on 2010-01-17 15:33:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a deep poem, and the meaning behind it is great. You are a very good writer, dear. I like the rhythm behind this, and the idea is very good and clear Keep writing, love!


    Abbie,
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    | Posted on 2010-01-18 00:00:00 | by smexybabe0101 | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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