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    dots Submission Name: tring to get over you.dots

    Author: xXRandomXx
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    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/BrokenHeart
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    Well, i thought i was in love, but then i was dumped, i cried for days, none stop! more then the relationship even lasted then, she asked me back out again, i said yes, she tells me she cheated on me! I dump her, then she ask me back out, AGAIN! and i say yes,, Will it last?.

    Submitted on 2010-01-17 23:48:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      no, i found a long time ago that people don't belong together no matter who or why we look for company, and when two people can't even connect with faithfulness when young and capable of more empathy than any grown up i give it maybe days, at best weeks, but eventually the game will get boring and the lesser involved will have a crisis of believe, in the relationship
    don't get too hurt because of young passion, its the adjective that holds back the real passion...ha sorry wasn't laughing at you
    | Posted on 2010-01-18 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]

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