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    dots Submission Name: her and her lonleynessdots
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    Author: MiseryMarie
    Elite Ratio:    2.92 - 8/12/15
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 770
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 638



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       this is just random its not about me its just a random poem that i thought would be great. im not alone im very happy so this is just a poem from my soul. im sure someone feels like this. this is how i used to feel. please do not try and kill your self it will not help believe me just give ur self a litte time and evreything will get straightend out. my life sure did it just took time bc i tried to do some of the things in this poem. it is the old me. i know i havent wrote in a while ive been dealing with alot of things and well now my life is good so yeah please read this thank you very much!----love me, CyndirelLa<3


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    She feels alone in this world. No one is there to support her.
    She has no one to help her in this life she leads.
    The time ticks away fading faster than ever its all a big blur.
    She's screaming theres a whole universe around her but no one hears her as she pleads.
    No one hers her as she screams out to the world like a wolf howling at the moon light.
    Shes scared and feels theres nothing left now so she takes the easy way out.
    Her blood leaves her body like a the water leaves the desert during a drought.
    The world turns dark as the sky in the middle of the night.




    Submitted on 2010-01-18 16:52:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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