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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye To Youthdots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGoodbye To Youthdots
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    Goodbye To Youth

    Back to the room that started it all
    Shattered dreams splattered on the wall
    Going back to the people who knew
    Your dreams would never come true
    Goodbye to youth, goodbye to youth
    It was left on a plethora of excuse


    Canít get back whatís already gone
    Knees weak, how can you go on?
    With the ticket, you know you canít go back
    Too much scrutiny, too much personal attack
    Goodbye to youth, goodbye to looks
    Bemoaning what time has took


    I canít see it improving
    It wonít get better




    Submitted on 2010-01-18 23:48:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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