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Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 144
Class/Type: Poetry /Nostalgia
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Ideals shatter bones
Shatter hearts, shatter homes
Glues dreams and the surreal
Leaving the adventurous alone
Cause all anyone wants to do is run
But teach me to stay
I have the will,
But I don't know the way

Sleeping at no-ones home
Far from destinations
Far from home
Far from anywhere
I've ever known 

Unlock my heart
Let the sadness flow
From each tired eye
Skin and bone
Hold it for keepsake
Until the light dawns
And the darkness fades
Worry not for my home
Just let it fade to grey

You hold the key,
Power, might & destiny-
To unlock a waterfall
Cleansing of self-hatrid
With the softess touch
Without an inch of rush
The world could change
Spin a million ways
But my heart will stay the same

My love,
Take my keys
& Lead me home.

Submitted on 2010-01-20 00:21:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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