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    dots Submission Name: Tales between the sheets 3dots
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    Author: isis_lenore
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 459/207/102
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    Description:
       It is all dialogue... there two other conversations before this one- therefore the 3.


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    dotsTales between the sheets 3dots
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    “What did you mean before- about searching for nonsensical things?”

    (A sigh.) “What do you want to hear?”

    “No, really- What did you mean?”

    “I mean that the things I look for are not real- They are Hollywood dreams and flights of fiction, but nothing more.”

    “Hmm… But what does that really mean?”

    “Why do you ask? Because, I don’t think it really matters, one way or the other, to you- not really.”

    “But I’m asking- doesn’t asking count for something?”

    “Yes, fine. I’ll play nice. I guess it means that I don’t believe in any of those things that books and movies portray as both desirable and attainable. I think those, to still remain, unnamed things, only exist in the world of make believe, not the world of right now, right here.”

    “Not even a little bit? No? Not at all, huh? I don’t know if I believe you.”

    “Oh and why not? Tell me, what’s not to believe?”

    “Oh, I don’t know, there is something in your eyes that tells me.”




    Submitted on 2010-01-20 15:00:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey my hats off to ya that was really cool
    you can take this alot of ways each time you read it
    but each time i read it i wanted to read more

    hey thanx i will be looking for #4

    sandman
    | Posted on 2010-01-21 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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