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    dots Submission Name: Tears and Fears (rv)dots
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    Author: night_angel
    ASL Info:    22/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 188/242/100
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsTears and Fears (rv)dots
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    Silent tears flow in stream
    Horrors fill night time dream
    Pain racks body and mind
    As heart ache continues to linger

    Deadly fears continue reign
    Hopes still fight with disdain
    Terror grips heart and soul
    As panic threatens consumption


    Something precious under strain
    Can break easily with pain
    But something so tortured
    Cannot yield to a new love




    Submitted on 2010-01-20 19:17:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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