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    Author: drkpoet
    ASL Info:    21/m/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 442/527/94
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Unspecified
    Total Views: 413
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    Description:
       nothing more nothing less writing to get it off my chest.


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    as the winds whispers loud and clear,
    i sit at the windows, and stare.
    wondering and wishing you were near.

    the dreams get so real,
    your body's got that wonderful feel,
    your love is the only thing i will ever steal.

    every minute you're not here,
    my dry mouth begins to water, and my eyes begin to tear.
    baby letme tell you one thing, I LOVE YOU, i swear.

    DrkPoet




    Submitted on 2004-07-22 18:38:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      `I agree with brokenwings, the line 'i swear' does make you think. Like he did something wrong, or just trying to tell her that he is really sincear about it. good job/
    | Posted on 2004-09-28 00:00:00 | by Kera | [ Reply to This ]



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