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    dots Submission Name: Lonely Heartdots
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    Author: MrSandman
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 0/2/10
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsLonely Heartdots
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    The Curse of my lonely Heart it was there from the very start sometimes it wite away and I was happy when thay said my name.


    But the Curse never leave me and I always whined up alone only my Heart knows my thoughts it pains me with sadness and fear.

    The Curse lifted for a time when I held her hand in mine but even she has gone away and my lonely Heart has no where to stay.

    The Curse pleges me every night the lonely heart is such a sight though I try and alood it's bonds my heart goes back to those sinking pounds.




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