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Haven't written in awhile, since before bootcamp. I tried writing in bootcamp but that didn't work out. I gotta type or I get writer's block.
Here is cold beyond imagination
And lonely eyes reflect on glass
Like love lost was imitation
Reality forcing it to pass
Much slower than grace would find
For I wince at memories still bound
Your voice still quivers in my mind
And it controls all but the sound
And I fear this void may last forever
As recovery slows with every tick
Longing for time we had together
The moment lingers that ended quick
I'm not sure where to go
Distance won't assist me here
I still feel uncertain though
I'm indecisive without you near
And I have worn this path too bare
Forever scarred, will always entice
Other courses are far less fair
Temptations present a rueful vice
I search for what I won't recognize
But dare not stray too far from here
This double vision would impede the wise
Decisions take advice from fear
And all have wounds that need some tending
We bide our time as we heal
Knowing due time our perfect ending
Waisting moments though naught is real
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