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    dots Submission Name: Answers??dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       Its a lil over dramatic but i hopefully expressed myself enough to be understood


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    dotsAnswers??dots
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    Taken aback by recent events
    I find myself sitting here pondering thoughts unwanted
    Nevertheless they are swimming about my mind

    I long to know why God dislikes me to the extent he shows me from my day to day life

    I am lost
    I bust my ass...
    I do favors for others...
    And I bit the bullet each and every time...

    Yet when its time to return the favor
    When its time for others to bust their ass

    No where can I find the favor to be returned
    Nor do I ever see them busting their ass!
    What did I ever do to desver the treatment I recieve?
    Where have I gone so wrong to desver such unfairness?

    PLEASE!
    I no not only LONG for these answers
    I need them for if I do not recieve them the difference in endings are Drastic
    Please...

    Life or Death weights heavly on my mind tonight




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    ||| Comments |||
      God hasn't put your problems upon you.
    The world simply has. God does no evil. Satan is the only one who does evil in the world.
    Going through problems teach you in the end.
    No matter how hard it seems at first.
    I should know.
    Everyone goes though crap and everyone hates it.
    You say you bust your butt and look around and no one else does the same for you.
    Untrue. You might just not be looking in the right place. Or either are too distracted by looking for others to do things for you that you busting your butt is for selfish reasons.

    Killing yourself is not a solution. It is in its self, a problem.

    Plus, one day, all of this will pass. And you've came this far, why waste all that time? Specially, when you get that taste of goodness afterwards.

    I know this not be very helpful, but, I had to say.
    | Posted on 2010-01-29 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]


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