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    dots Submission Name: bordem first seriesdots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 669
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1490



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    dotsbordem first seriesdots
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    okay , so this is about, truly nothing to be honest
    simply a part of imagination that needs to become a reality
    so i believe i should right this down, whatever this may be
    this may be a letter, or a note
    or simply a awkward speech to oneself in order to pass the time,
    but none the less, this is something
    like all things, this is something
    that is undeniable
    To say this isn't real is naive, and quiet frankly rude
    no one is to judge existence something ,even this
    without first examining and judging themselves
    and that is something far beyond natural human ideal
    beyond our ideals...
    So what you may as is this about
    this is a simply writing
    or something in the attempts of wanting to be a writing
    stating that it, like many things
    things forgotten,lost,discarded
    or just hidden real well
    are still there , we're all still here
    and no it's not that we don't want to talk, but we want you to talk
    you to respond, you to state whats wrong
    whats right...whats left
    it's simple as that in truth
    open your eyes and you find life, and if not life
    then existence

    so as this comes to a close
    without any real meaning nor form
    recall that it is form, just free of comprehension
    and that my dear dear accumulation of atoms

    Is a beautiful thing




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      I love this! It makes the reader think and think hard which is something lacking from most thing anymore. I like the rambling trippy flow you had to it as well it was just different. Just clean up a lil of th gramatical stuff . . . though I wouldnt clean it all up cause its raw and adds a lil to the personality of the piece. Awsome piece, keep writing.

    sarah
    | Posted on 2010-01-26 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]


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