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    dots Submission Name: What "Precious" you are!dots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWhat "Precious" you are!dots
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    What "Precious" you are!
    You, who can laugh in one instant
    and cry in the next and still turn around and
    say "I have no worth".
    You, whose smile has the power to tug out the smile of another.
    You, whose heart truths create space for other hearts to reveal themselves.
    YOU, whose lighted candle
    lights other candles
    Forget we are but one flame.
    What "Precious" you are!

    *whisper* "Do you know that?"

    What "Precious" you are!
    You, Yes YOU.
    With your own thoughts
    and perceptions.
    Peering on wholeness
    from this and that
    vantage point,
    sharing your unique experience
    of the facets of the same diamond
    we all gaze upon,
    differently.
    What "Precious" you are!

    What "Precious" you are!
    You, who can feel compassion
    and joy and empathy and sadness,
    and anger and hurt.
    And yet are none of those.
    You, who can think yourself
    so many realities to live in.
    And often do not remember the illusion of them.
    You, who are neither your thoughts
    nor your emotions.
    What "Precious" you are!

    *whisper* "What are you?"

    What "Precious" you are!
    You, who can look upon nature
    with such awe and wonder.
    One holy sunset, the miracle of dewdrops,
    The smell of a pine tree, falling into the eyes of a loved one.
    You, who can experience such beauty.
    YOU, you, who so often forgets your own.
    What "Precious" you are!

    *whisper* "Can you let it in? Will you let it out?"

    What "Precious" you are!
    You, who so often feels broken
    having yet to own your own wholeness.
    YOU, who has scattered yourself in a thousand other faces
    and blinded yourself to the LOVE you have for all beings and your self.
    You, who has fooled yourself into separation
    And forgotten you are ALWAYS connected
    What "Precious" you are!
    What "Precious" you truly, truly are!

    *whisper* "TO BE HUMAN IS PRECIOUS"

    What "PRECIOUS" YOU ARE!
    Potential manifesting!
    Wholeness expressing itself!
    Divine spark of light!
    Unique beauty held in sight!
    Infinite consciousness!
    Eternal being!
    How precious is that?!
    WHAT "PRECIOUS" YOU ARE!
    WHAT "PRECIOUS" YOU TRULY, TRULY ARE!




    Submitted on 2010-01-26 14:04:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "You, who can feel compassion
    and joy and empathy and sadness,
    and anger and hurt.
    And yet are none of those."

    I love this line. I think it is a great thought. To know all of these yet not be them. Quite thought provoking.

    Though, I don't exactly understand your point of the whole poem in a whole, like, exactly what you mean by it or who you are talking to, completly.

    Will you explain to me? I would really love to know. Quite a curious person, I am.
    | Posted on 2010-01-29 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]


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