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    Author: xAngeliquex
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 14/14/30
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 601
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 437



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       Yeah, I don't care if you like it. I'm just great like that. (Not really o_O)


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    Remembering,
    Loathing,
    Despising,
    Loving,
    Honing...
    These memories.

    Wishing,
    Wanting,
    Having,
    Love.

    Never knowing,
    But keep on going,
    Stopped in my tracks,
    Ready to take one thousand steps back,
    Ignoring my love,
    Hating God for what's above,
    Voicing my stupidity,
    Losing my sanity...
    Life.




    Submitted on 2010-01-26 15:17:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's kind of choppy.

    Almost like someone had taken ones arm and chopped random places of their skin with an ax.
    | Posted on 2010-01-29 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]


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