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    dots Submission Name: vintage cowboy turquoise a go-godots
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    Author: leocrates
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 103/34/38
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsvintage cowboy turquoise a go-godots
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    Coffee and time travel
    The power the power the power
    The militant minds
    Right?
    The colt…
    The colt
    The coal steam engine
    The rail
    The gun the way the gun of the way of the gun
    And more
    Just interval
    Just burned like a protest and immortal
    Try and stop the assimilation
    Its futile…
    Existence is not quite you yet joke
    Like smelted nation
    Like smithy…
    Where are the posse’s horses
    Thousands of years of domestication
    And it buys them a field to retire in…
    So why the long face…
    So why the long face
    Blondie dances a in a petty-coat




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      nice story telling but I was lost lol. Felt like an old man was telling me a story that didn't make sense. I don't have the skill to write either but I just thought I'd tell you this. :) maybe I didn't get it oh well...
    | Posted on 2010-01-27 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]


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