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    dots Submission Name: I Want You Moredots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 473
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 861



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    dotsI Want You Moredots
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    I wanna hold you in my arms all the time
    And tell you I love you and only you
    As you reassure me that youíre all mine
    As you touch my face as you always do
    And you know how to make me melt in your hands
    Loving me without boundaries
    Together forever I will be your man
    Iím your soul mate and youíve found me

    When I want you more
    Youíre always there
    Never let me down
    Not even a frown
    In my face
    Even though

    You are not here
    When I need you most
    You are always
    With me on the phone
    Distance apart
    Miles away
    Weíre still connected in the heart
    Every damn day
    And when I wake or sleep
    You are the one thatís on my mind
    You are worth the keep
    A treasure hard to findÖ




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