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Author: daughterofdeath
ASL Info:    23/Female/West Virginia
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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I once thought I knew what love was Now I realize hoe naive I was. I thought of a quickened heartbeat, and tingles up my spine. I love yous and long kisses. Before, anyone I loved was perfect. Flawless, while mine piled up. But now, I know your flaws, I accept and embraced them. They show me that you not perfect and that I'm not living in a fantasy. I weigh your flaws against love, and my love is the clear winner. I take your flaws, career, and past problems and promise to love you regardless

Submitted on 2010-01-27 21:19:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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