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    dots Submission Name: Lazy Summer Daydots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 594
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    Description:
       At home in Northern Cali enveloped by the American River! Home Sweet Home!!!

    Love, Peace, Joy, Grace, Faith!!!


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    dotsLazy Summer Daydots
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    A poet's view
    of the summer season
    nature's cloak
    of time and reason
    The river's current
    carries on sublime
    Life's path varied
    sometimes a climb
    Skies of Virtue
    clouds of dreams
    grasses wither
    yet landscape gleams
    Lazy Summer Day




    Submitted on 2004-07-22 21:45:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked the simplicity of this write. It made me invision someone laying in a hammock under the warmth of the summer sun, a slight breeze playfuly tickling your skin as you relax and muse.
    | Posted on 2004-10-26 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]


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