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    dots Submission Name: Every Mans Choicedots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 54/139/173
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 569
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 951



    Description:
       This one I like to think is about the option/choice to fight back and rebel against the authority of those who use they're position to decieve and lie. To kill and maim. But let your put your own background to it. give it it's own meaning. And let it mean something to you. Let it spark your anger and your rage. Let it open your minds, and free your voice. Be the one who millions may follow. Or be the one, that follows millions. The choice is yours. :P


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    dotsEvery Mans Choicedots
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    As submission nears, retreat is not an option.
    More like defeat... Now thats an option.
    Raise that flag... Hang it high.
    Let them see its white.... Let it fly.
    Prepare the jaunty little joke.
    One that for the enemy, it may provoke.
    Let them step, let them weave.
    Let them see, but ready to deceive.
    Bring them in, lower the trap.
    Watch them squeal... In the trap.
    Then pull back, and create sin.
    Massacre the lot, even they're kin.
    But back in reality, this is obscene.
    Every man and woman is green.
    Novice... Beginner... Every last one.
    But set forth chaos, and hand them a gun.
    Kill or be killed, this is your choice.
    Fight or die... The one and only choice.
    I bet they take it.
    I bet they take it.
    I bet they fight, even without cause.
    I bet they win, regardless the loss.






    Submitted on 2010-01-29 16:19:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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