Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: We Live Like Ghostsdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 604
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1536



    Description:
       It's about Murder, and the darkness we know to exist among the faces we know best.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsWe Live Like Ghostsdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Give it some time, soon enough you will feel the depths of the water.
    Cool, glistening surface.
    Reflections of faces that you've seen,
    oh what a tragedy.
    Sweetie, don't laugh,
    you're just so ordinary.
    With freedom gone and nothing but my twisted depravity can you see the monster that lurks in the deep.
    Stop yourself,
    restrain yourself with a mouth full of leather belt.

    I will baptize you in my consuming disease,
    I just love tasting the innocent sweets.
    Inhale please,
    just a few gulps and you'll be released.
    Call it murder,
    I call it an art form.
    You're not the first and but at the moment you're my number one.
    We live like our disease.
    We live like ghosts and we take with out regret.
    No face to be seen just a haunting chill to feel.

    We feast on the terrors of your seed.
    No social discrepancies, no quips or quarrels behind the vice.
    I can feel the ice of the water,
    yet so crystal clear it bleeds black.
    No more struggling,
    they can trench for you all day I won't make you too hard to find.
    In the end we all know what transpired.

    Sing my little ordinary birdy.
    Sing the crimes that have been done,
    shine the spot light on a little angel of God.

    With a twisted smile, the face is always changing and it grows.

    We live like ghosts




    Submitted on 2010-01-29 21:03:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    182424

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    written by Daniel Barlow
    Next to you written by robbie
    Rose colored glasses written by taintedsmiles
    not alone written by Daniel Barlow
    Challenge - Msg to a Mountain Lynx written by Daniel Barlow
    Meditations one written by MyPeriodical
    Behest written by Daniel Barlow
    Scared written by MyPeriodical
    HeroĆ­na written by MyPeriodical
    Human Progression written by ForgottenGraves
    untitled written by MyPeriodical
    Agitations written by MyPeriodical
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    I am a sorry son. written by MyPeriodical
    A Donde Llegamos written by MyPeriodical
    Quoth The Skies and its limits written by MyPeriodical
    Silly Rulers. written by MyPeriodical
    Two hundred and seven times written by MyPeriodical
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Giant written by MyPeriodical
    Leyenda de Un Maldito Cobarde written by MyPeriodical
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    One day older, One year wiser. written by Rhythmal
    Hide away written by robbie
    Release written by robbie
    written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry