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    dots Submission Name: Liesdots
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    Author: alyssafrench16
    ASL Info:    17/f/inherroomville
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 8/22/19
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 670
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    dotsLiesdots
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    Lies
    come from you like flies to honey,

    Lies
    pour from those lips like vomit on the clean white tile floor,

    Lies
    whisper small comforts in the ear,

    Lies
    slip off the tongue with ease,

    Lies
    are the only thing you seem to say,

    Lies
    keep you alive, day to day,

    Lies
    are what make you, you

    Lies
    is all that I hear,

    And lies,
    are what I've become.





    Submitted on 2010-01-29 21:39:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lies,
    come faster then the truth
    Lies,
    Are evils deep roots
    Lies,
    are counter acted by will
    I'd be lying if i couldn't comprend your skill.

    YOUR STYLE BECOMES MORE AND MORE CONTAGIOUS AS I READ WHAT YOU WRITE
    | Posted on 2010-02-01 00:00:00 | by essence of life | [ Reply to This ]
      Lies,
    beneath a cold wet tarp.
    Lies,
    have broken a solem heart.
    Lies,
    would be to say that this poem was wasted.
    Truth,
    be told, it's one of the best I've tasted.
    | Posted on 2010-01-30 00:00:00 | by Silenced poet | [ Reply to This ]


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